Friday, March 26, 2010

thesis statement

During his presidency, FDR put much of the federal money for human relief and for public works projects which at the moment helped poverty-stricken Americans but his policies neglected businesses.

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  1. Thesis statement could have been stronger - Ex. "The FDR administration focused on funding human relief and public works projects yet neglected the interests of the business community"

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